Ventomology

Yeah, I'm a but worried that I'll fall into the same trap as last LMS, where the travel time to get from point a to point b really bogs things ...

Yeah I think I have a little less idea of how to start this story than I did with Conics, and it definitely shows in the things that I chose ...

Hmmm yeah the face stuff will probably go away just because this is basically the scene with the most people in it ever, but I'll work on the pacing and ...

There is actually like a whole season about digital torture I'm so sorry.

Hmmm... I think, if we had heard more about the Comtesse from the beginning--rumors, histories, more time in Whisper's headspace, etc.--then it might have made her seem more like the ...

Hmm I'm not sure how likely it would be for the same mutation to pop up totally independently, and equally unsure about how that would even fit into this narrative. ...

Haha yeah that's exactly how I wanted to characterize Matt. Glad that got across well. Thanks!

Unfortunately I have another chapter before we get any repeat appearances from William or Cam, but you might find a new perspective on what's happened already. Thanks so much for ...

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No worries! I'm glad you liked it.

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Oh my goodness, I didn't see this for some reason. Thanks so much!

Thanks! Honestly, I tried a bit of imagery in this piece at one point, but it didn't seem to fit the style. You should check out some of the other ...

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