Ventomology

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Clearly, I should have given more thought to my characters... I must take this into account while I continue writing and while I plot out my next work... Anyways, thank ...

Ah, goodness. You're definitely right about the character reactions. I do have a good reason on Yvette's part, but the others... not so much. And thank you for your tip ...

Thank you so much for reviewing! Since you reminded me, I guess it's time to go through the coming chapters and edit some details in, huh? I never get enough ...

Thanks so much! I realize not everyone is a math geek, so that number systems thing must have been a little weird... And you're right about the character relationships. (I ...

Well, foreshadowing is like hinting vaguely at future events. Even the mentioning of a name or event can foreshadow something if used correctly. Like if you're writing a version of ...

Oh, and in my school, the bell rings before and after class, so I guess I'm just pulling from experience a bit much there. Thanks again!

Thank you for pointing out my mistakes and doing your signature red-pen editing! It helps a LOT. Also, the quantum bit is true. In order to coax atoms into a ...

As always, you're quick to pick up on what I only did mediocre on. Since I'm mostly done fiddling with the next chapter, I figured I'd change the dialogue a ...

Thank you for reviewing! I reread that piece, and you were so right, that ending wasn't nearly as good as some other ones. After a few hours mulling it over, ...

You're very right. I wouldn't act at all the way Noel does when she figures out Theo's creepy powers. But she's also a real ditz, and takes things pretty well. ...

Well, under the publishing center, there are the portfolio and drafts and whatnot, so you just go to your portfolio and click the piece you want to edit. It's easy ...

Thanks! This was almost like having someone go in with red pen and correct it physically (my absolute favorite kind of editing). I'll make sure to take your suggestions into ...

I went ahead and fixed that bit you commented on. Thanks so much for always reviewing!

Thank you! I'm not sure I'm quite on the standard of the published crowd, but your saying so really helps!