Ventomology

WOW. I'll have to check back on the Count's thing there, definitely. (Thanks for pointing that out.) And I guess the characters' appearances do need some reinforcement. I so need ...

Oh my goodness... Did I never get back to you on this review? I feel kind of rude. I'll check back for those things you pointed out. Thanks!

Yay! Thanks a ton for reading through this. I know jumping into the ninth chapter of a novel can be confusing...

Thank you so much! I'm really glad you liked the characters-I just hope I kept them as strong in the later chapters... Happy Review Day!

Ah, I see.

Oh, the hyperbole is making me swoon! Don't keep me waiting on week 4. Ciao!

Thanks a ton! I've had problems with those icky-flowing sentences before, so I'll be sure to keep an eye out for them.

Thanks!

Thanks! (I hate to be rude, or to look a gift horse in the mouth, but you misspelled 'punctuation'.)

Um... Fragments are often used to accentuate a feeling or idea. Thanks for pointing everything else out though! (And sorry I got to you late.)

Thanks, Cricket! (What do you mean favor? Did I review something of yours?) And sorry I'm late. I was on vacation with family.

Ooh, yes. I see what you're getting at. Sorry I got back to you so late too; spring break vacations are electronic-free in my house. Thanks!

Ooh, I like that idea. Using dialogue to assist in setting? I wish I'd thought of that sooner. Thanks a ton!

Um... thanks!

Yeah... I had a word limit, so I needed to cut it off. That was just the best place to do it. Thanks for the tips! (Show writing is not ...