Ventomology

Oh, the hyperbole is making me swoon! Don't keep me waiting on week 4. Ciao!

Thanks a ton! I've had problems with those icky-flowing sentences before, so I'll be sure to keep an eye out for them.

Thanks!

Thanks! (I hate to be rude, or to look a gift horse in the mouth, but you misspelled 'punctuation'.)

Um... Fragments are often used to accentuate a feeling or idea. Thanks for pointing everything else out though! (And sorry I got to you late.)

Thanks, Cricket! (What do you mean favor? Did I review something of yours?) And sorry I'm late. I was on vacation with family.

Ooh, yes. I see what you're getting at. Sorry I got back to you so late too; spring break vacations are electronic-free in my house. Thanks!

Ooh, I like that idea. Using dialogue to assist in setting? I wish I'd thought of that sooner. Thanks a ton!

Um... thanks!

Yeah... I had a word limit, so I needed to cut it off. That was just the best place to do it. Thanks for the tips! (Show writing is not ...

Ack! Clearly I need to go over my capitalization rules again. Thanks!

Whoa... I never thought about the adoption part. (Probably should stick to backgrounds I actually know about.) And thanks for catching my inconsistencies!

Uh... Thanks for reading through this!

Ooh yay! I really like how you did the beginning of Jason's part. So so so awesome.

Thanks, Scoeri! I'll see what I can do about the whole directness thing, but the wizard bit was intentional. (Laughs evilly)