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Re: Globetrotters Chapter 7 - Going Home
You could do the three asterisks, or some kind of objectively written lead-in. Either way works. But for sake of consistency, it'd be better to write something in rather than ...
Jun 15, 2014 -
Re: Golden Bird, Red Fox: Chapter seven
Ugh... I hate the preposition rule. Even if it's correct, it makes the writing seem a little stiff. I'll see what I can do about that one. As for the ...
Jun 15, 2014 -
Re: Golden Bird, Red Fox: Chapter ten
Ah... I chose to ignore Ferrell and the inn. It would have been really boring. I will look into those nitpicks you pointed out! Thanks so much!
Jun 15, 2014 -
Re: Golden Bird, Red Fox: Chapter six
*cackles evilly* I have very terrible things planned out for everyone. And rest assured, you shall hate Ferrell even more. Anyways, thanks so much for catching that typo! (I can't ...
Jun 14, 2014 -
Re: Corps of Recovery: Part 12
I was avoiding the dialogue because it would have all been just 'filler' stuff, and because Rudi wouldn't really listen anyway... Anyways, I will definitely use 'sleuthing', and I'll fix ...
Jun 13, 2014 -
Re: Golden Bird, Red Fox: Chapter five
Eh... yes. You will see why the golden bird is important. That's actually the part I've just started writing! As for all your word replacements: thank you so much! I ...
Jun 13, 2014 -
Re: Golden Bird, Red Fox: Chapter four
You will continue to want to throttle Ferrell; I guarantee it. Oh, and thanks a ton for catching all those points with the fence! I'll see to those right away. ...
Jun 13, 2014 -
Re: Golden Bird, Red Fox: Chapter three
Ah... Braxton is just like that. It's his flaw. I hope. And he's not very fond of his family. As for some of those nitpicks, thanks so much for finding ...
Jun 12, 2014 -
Re: Golden Bird, Red Fox: Chapter two
Thanks for the review! It's nice to know people are actually reading this. As for a lot of your earlier comments, I tend to write in a conversational manner. It's ...
Jun 12, 2014 -
Re: Golden Bird, Red Fox: Chapter nine
Don't worry; I'm still working on it! Hopefully I'll get the next two or three chapters up this month.
Jun 12, 2014 -
Re: Cry Wolf: Chapter 3
Aww, thanks!
Jun 9, 2014 -
Re: The Bloodbath
I'll fix some of those points you illustrated. Thanks a lot for the review!
Jun 5, 2014 -
Re: The Bloodbath
Yeah... bloody stuff-not my thing. Hopefully there won't be a challenge on it. I will fix that nitpick, and probably check out Pomp's piece. I want to see this sassy ...
Jun 3, 2014 -
Re: The Blood Bath
Is it Danish?
Jun 2, 2014 -
Re: The Oarsman's Lament
Oh... I see what you did there.
Jun 1, 2014
