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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 1.05)

    Ah, the vampire. You'll be seeing more of him very soon. For number 4, I'm glad you relate to her! Also, tell me if I overstep or do something wrong ...

    Sep 29, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 1.10)

    Oh, the enchanted DNA thing is more like having a gene turned on or off. It can change, but not easily. And whatever suspicions you have, you're probably somewhere on ...

    Sep 29, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 1.09)

    Ack! Mistakes! I shall fix those this afternoon. By the way, does the 'sir' rule apply to other formalities like mister, miss, and Madame?

    Sep 29, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 1.07)

    AHAHAHA! You will see what happens to poor Martin. I have excellent things planned for him when I reach Friday. I'll fix the phonetics. Thanks for the review! Remember to ...

    Sep 28, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 1.06)

    Hmm, I don't think the drama of route 40 eastbound subsides until I start writing the Thursday scenes. I'm glad you enjoyed the rest of it though!

    Sep 28, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Action / Adventure Re: The Adventures of Darren Cassidy - Chapter Five, Part Four - Beware the Watchog

    Maybe I was looking at the wrong part when I double-checked the review... sorry about that.

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 1.10)

    Ugh, yeah. This was the info dump chapter. Also, you have a Cheesecake Factory where you live? I am so jealous. I've only ever been there once. (I bet you ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: A Snap-Dragon Stolen Chapter 5: (part 2)

    Oh, thank goodness I ended it well. Thanks for the review, and happy review day to you too!

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 1.08)

    Aww, thanks for the review, Stego! Happy review day!

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 1.08)

    Ooh! This is the first time anyone's really commented on the characterization! I'm so glad you enjoyed reading this. Thanks for the review!

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 1.11)

    Ah, when people ask what will happen next in this piece, I feel so guilty. It can take a few chapters to return to a particular thread of the storyline. ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 1.11)

    I checked and changed the nitpicks you pointed out. I'm glad you enjoyed the style too! Thanks for the review!

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 1.11)

    It's nice to hear from you again! Mr. Stevenson and Mellie are cops, yes. I'll keep your suggestion about giving some history to Mellie's armor in mind too. Thanks for ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 1.05)

    I have fixed both notes. 'Smoothen' is apparently not a word, but I think you were still right about just 'smooth' being wrong. Also, I thought dragons were known for ...

    Sep 24, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 1.04)

    You should give me some of your luck, Hunter, because I am constantly getting papercuts. (And cuts from the trigger key on my trombone, and sewing pins, and literally everything ...

    Sep 24, 2015


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