Ventomology

Yeah... I need to work on that explicit danger thing. Thanks so much for taking the time to catch up!

I refuse to use the word selfie unironically in literature. Thanks for pointing out the issue with public reaction. I definitely skipped over some details in that area that should ...

If you couldn't tell, I do like talking about bathrooms in literature. Mostly because I once read a tumblr post where the poster wondered about why characters in most literature ...

...I must have missed this while I was at orientation. Sorry! Anyways, it's good to know I'm doing okay with Ellipse's backstory. Pacing with mysteries is always difficult. Thank you!

Ah, the whereabouts of the rest of the crew are actually addressed in the next chapter! I was one step ahead of you this time. Thanks so much!

You may catch up before it shows up, but I do have a Tejal-gets-forced-to-eat-gross-food scene planned. Thanks again!

You're going to feel the need to scream as soon as you start on chapter 24. You know... on Monday or whatever.

Gosh, I honestly love writing dialogue between Tejal and Focci. Those are some of the better moments in the future chapters.

I have neither read nor watched Lord of the Rings .

You're going to like chapter 21. :)

Willful ignorance is one of my favorite character weaknesses, because it provides such great opportunities for dramatic irony. I actually think you'll really enjoy how Ellipse's involvement with the f

The valley girl accent has corrupted us all.

Hey, it's totally okay! There are ultra-famous writers out there who do worse, and this is several months old.

If there's one thing I need to work on in general, it's probably clear motives. I was planning on getting to that in the dialogue of the next chapter, but ...

Ah... I always forget that the Valley Girl accent is a thing. I talk like them, just less so, and so I forget that there's some connotation involved with that ...