Ventomology

You're going to feel the need to scream as soon as you start on chapter 24. You know... on Monday or whatever.

Gosh, I honestly love writing dialogue between Tejal and Focci. Those are some of the better moments in the future chapters.

I have neither read nor watched Lord of the Rings .

You're going to like chapter 21. :)

Willful ignorance is one of my favorite character weaknesses, because it provides such great opportunities for dramatic irony. I actually think you'll really enjoy how Ellipse's involvement with the f

The valley girl accent has corrupted us all.

Hey, it's totally okay! There are ultra-famous writers out there who do worse, and this is several months old.

If there's one thing I need to work on in general, it's probably clear motives. I was planning on getting to that in the dialogue of the next chapter, but ...

Ah... I always forget that the Valley Girl accent is a thing. I talk like them, just less so, and so I forget that there's some connotation involved with that ...

I knew I could count on you to review my dastardly political drama moments. Colonialism is so fun. Anyways, I admit to being vague about a lot of things, but ...

Ah, I hate it when I mess up pronouns. Societal binary is such a pain. Anyways, sorry for not replying to some of your other reviews. I did read them! ...

I think of it as a KFC too, honestly.

Oh my goodness how did I not see this? Anyway, belated as it is, thanks so much for leaving a review!

Oh, you will love chapter 21. I think it's the new funniest chapter so far.

The next chapter is a total letdown let me tell you.