Ventomology

I edited the earlier "inserted" chapters to include the autobiography titles, so that should help? My preferred way of denoting Tejal vs Focci's stories would be to have some serif ...

Fox, I think I've actually got most of the remaining excerpts planned for post-cliffhanger spots. Sorry! As always, it's lovely to hear your thoughts on where the plot is going. ...

Hey! Sorry I never got back to you on some of your reviews! I promise I read them. I've just been super busy packing for school and finishing up work, ...

Wow, I was worried that the sudden security thing would throw people off, but this has seriously abated those worries. Also, I think I mentioned it in passing before, but ...

Sorry about the delayed response! I got to this at the end of a lunch break a couple days ago and forgot to come back. I couldn't decide how I ...

The Soph thing probably could have used more cool-down, you're right. But they are actually on a different station in this chapter. If that's not clear, let me know and ...

Oh, the album is pretty important later on. We'll get there though. No worries!

Unless I came up with some convoluted plan where a character hacked/rigged a battery to run out quickly, I would never go that route. Things that happen by chance must ...

Thanks man! I think Ellipse's pain was more the inspiration for me to work out. And now that you've mentioned flammable substances, I might just come up with an excuse ...

Oho. I wouldn't worry about the bounty hunter part for much longer. I've been planning a pretty big return for several weeks now. Probably in a second draft though, I'd ...

Hmm, I may not have directly connected the ISTS with Intergalactic Science and Technology Summit. You're right about that. However, it will come up in a later conversation in uh... ...

I probably should clear up the whys of all the places they go. I thought it was implied that the kids are just following a shipping schedule that had already ...

Hey no worries! Burnout happens to everyone at some point. The bathroom thing probably is pretty repetitive now that I think about it. But I will use the bathrooms again, ...

Okay, so our sky is blue during the day because of how the atmosphere refracts light. If you have a thinner atmosphere (or one with a different enough composition), the ...

Thanks!! Honestly, radioactive stuff is really nuanced, and it isn't just the energy signals that can be detected. Plus you have to factor in half life, amount, concentration, distance, etc, ...