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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Loosely Lawful | 18

    Wow you were on such a tear today! I'm honestly not sure where I stumbled across this stylistic choice to jump between scenes that can be very far apart in ...

    Jun 21
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Loosely Lawful | 13

    I'm sooo glad that the relationship between Avon and Sera is reading as I intended! I'm always scared that I'll write myself into a corner with their arguments haha. And ...

    Jun 18
  • Poetry » Humor, Horror Re: A terrible poem

    Unironically the assonance and consonance are pretty great

    Apr 6
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Loosely Lawful | 10

    Eeeeeee you are picking up what I'm putting down and I'm sooo excited

    Feb 20
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Loosely Lawful | 5

    No better name than an obvious one haha!

    Feb 16
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Supernatural Re: The Quantum Mind: Chapter 1

    Oh man I was like... A baby when I wrote this. This work is over 10 years old! And I think was the first thing I ever published on YWS? ...

    Jan 8
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Loosely Lawful | 11

    Sounds like I have some rewording to do in a future iteration! If I add something about Sera being surprised at how good Ben is at catch, and that she ...

    Dec 29, 2025
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Loosely Lawful | 10

    "In the buff" is a somewhat roundabout way of saying someone's got no clothes on... So yes, it is innuendo in this case. I'm so glad you like Kyle! Finding ...

    Dec 29, 2025
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Loosely Lawful | 9

    I do feel I should give you the warning that I initially had the idea of this being a five-book thing, and that Kyle's secrets would not come out until ...

    Dec 22, 2025
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Loosely Lawful | 5

    omg wow you are really making your way through these! I am lowkey still working on this project... just haven't uploaded in a hot minute. Maybe if you make it ...

    Dec 22, 2025
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Loosely Lawful | 8

    OMG thank you!! You know I could have sworn I made that an em-dash. Maybe I need to double check my autocorrect/shortcuts...

    Jun 8, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Loosely Lawful | 8

    Kyle is the Best Boy

    Dec 18, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Shadow's Rising Chapter 10 (V1)

    Oooh! That is a fun twist. Remember to foreshadow!! So excited.

    Dec 17, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Fantasy Re: Chapter 4: Your World ( part 1)

    Hey! Just dropping by after you left a comment on my WRFF thread. Like I said, I don't really review novels with a lot of reviews already, but I've caught ...

    Oct 12, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Loosely Lawful | 6

    I am. SO GLAD. that people like Kyle. I literally have a lacrosse slang dictionary up when I'm working on this piece.

    Oct 1, 2023


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