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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Loosely Lawful | 7

    It's a wierd relationship of sorts- on one hand she's jealous of her, and at the same time she needs her help to succeed in magic. I imagine this must ...

    Yesterday
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Loosely Lawful | 8

    I... read a lot more hockey romance than I would like to admit, and Kyle is 100% pulled from a lot of what I wish hockey romance leads were like, ...

    Yesterday
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Loosely Lawful | 6

    Haha more to throw on my list of things I would tighten up if I ever get to draft 2. I'll have to think on how I would introduce Ben ...

    Sep 4
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Loosely Lawful | 4

    This is def one of my favorite chapters that I wrote... I'm glad you liked it! I wish every chapter was as good lol

    Sep 3
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Loosely Lawful | 1

    Hii! Honestly they are both so cringe and it's very on purpose. Hopefully as things progress and you see more of them, they will become less cringe, though I have ...

    Aug 31
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: [LMS] Loosely Lawful | 19

    Hi hi!! I think chapter 19 is kind of where the LMS mentality sets in... though I did write it before LMS started! I think stuff will start to get ...

    Jul 24
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: [LMS] Loosely Lawful | 19

    I think the green room chapters go back to 16? Everything before that has at least 2 reviews iirc. And thanks for stopping by!

    Jul 7
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Loosely Lawful | 15

    Haha we're still in the chapters where I wrote and rewrote like five million times and lost track of what was discussed, what needed to be discussed, and what I ...

    Jul 7
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: [LMS] Loosely Lawful | 19

    Ahhh... The wild I use to separate my LMS weeks. Whoops! Things will probably be a lot less polished as we go forward, so I'll do my best to fix ...

    Jun 26
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Loosely Lawful | 14

    Ahhhh I didn't even think about how I characterized the temple in these different moments. So exciting when a reviewer stumbles on something that I didn't do on purpose but ...

    Jun 22
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Loosely Lawful | 18

    Wow you were on such a tear today! I'm honestly not sure where I stumbled across this stylistic choice to jump between scenes that can be very far apart in ...

    Jun 21
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Loosely Lawful | 13

    I'm sooo glad that the relationship between Avon and Sera is reading as I intended! I'm always scared that I'll write myself into a corner with their arguments haha. And ...

    Jun 18
  • Poetry » Humor, Horror Re: A terrible poem

    Unironically the assonance and consonance are pretty great

    Apr 6
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Loosely Lawful | 10

    Eeeeeee you are picking up what I'm putting down and I'm sooo excited

    Feb 20
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Loosely Lawful | 5

    No better name than an obvious one haha!

    Feb 16


As a former (and rather excellent) liar herself, Aru knew that, sometimes, speaking the truth felt like wrenching a thorn out of your side. But doing the opposite meant pretending it wasn't there. And that made every single step ache. It was no way to live.
— Roshani Chokshi, Aru Shah and the Nectar of Immortality