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Re: Loosely Lawful | 7
It's a wierd relationship of sorts- on one hand she's jealous of her, and at the same time she needs her help to succeed in magic. I imagine this must ...
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Re: Loosely Lawful | 8
I... read a lot more hockey romance than I would like to admit, and Kyle is 100% pulled from a lot of what I wish hockey romance leads were like, ...
Yesterday -
Re: Loosely Lawful | 6
Haha more to throw on my list of things I would tighten up if I ever get to draft 2. I'll have to think on how I would introduce Ben ...
Sep 4 -
Re: Loosely Lawful | 4
This is def one of my favorite chapters that I wrote... I'm glad you liked it! I wish every chapter was as good lol
Sep 3 -
Re: Loosely Lawful | 1
Hii! Honestly they are both so cringe and it's very on purpose. Hopefully as things progress and you see more of them, they will become less cringe, though I have ...
Aug 31 -
Re: [LMS] Loosely Lawful | 19
Hi hi!! I think chapter 19 is kind of where the LMS mentality sets in... though I did write it before LMS started! I think stuff will start to get ...
Jul 24 -
Re: [LMS] Loosely Lawful | 19
I think the green room chapters go back to 16? Everything before that has at least 2 reviews iirc. And thanks for stopping by!
Jul 7 -
Re: Loosely Lawful | 15
Haha we're still in the chapters where I wrote and rewrote like five million times and lost track of what was discussed, what needed to be discussed, and what I ...
Jul 7 -
Re: [LMS] Loosely Lawful | 19
Ahhh... The wild I use to separate my LMS weeks. Whoops! Things will probably be a lot less polished as we go forward, so I'll do my best to fix ...
Jun 26 -
Re: Loosely Lawful | 14
Ahhhh I didn't even think about how I characterized the temple in these different moments. So exciting when a reviewer stumbles on something that I didn't do on purpose but ...
Jun 22 -
Re: Loosely Lawful | 18
Wow you were on such a tear today! I'm honestly not sure where I stumbled across this stylistic choice to jump between scenes that can be very far apart in ...
Jun 21 -
Re: Loosely Lawful | 13
I'm sooo glad that the relationship between Avon and Sera is reading as I intended! I'm always scared that I'll write myself into a corner with their arguments haha. And ...
Jun 18 -
Re: A terrible poem
Unironically the assonance and consonance are pretty great
Apr 6 -
Re: Loosely Lawful | 10
Eeeeeee you are picking up what I'm putting down and I'm sooo excited
Feb 20 -
Re: Loosely Lawful | 5
No better name than an obvious one haha!
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