Ventomology

I think the green room chapters go back to 16? Everything before that has at least 2 reviews iirc. And thanks for stopping by!

Haha we're still in the chapters where I wrote and rewrote like five million times and lost track of what was discussed, what needed to be discussed, and what I ...

Ahhh... The wild I use to separate my LMS weeks. Whoops! Things will probably be a lot less polished as we go forward, so I'll do my best to fix ...

Ahhhh I didn't even think about how I characterized the temple in these different moments. So exciting when a reviewer stumbles on something that I didn't do on purpose but ...

Wow you were on such a tear today! I'm honestly not sure where I stumbled across this stylistic choice to jump between scenes that can be very far apart in ...

I'm sooo glad that the relationship between Avon and Sera is reading as I intended! I'm always scared that I'll write myself into a corner with their arguments haha. And ...

Unironically the assonance and consonance are pretty great

Eeeeeee you are picking up what I'm putting down and I'm sooo excited

No better name than an obvious one haha!

Oh man I was like... A baby when I wrote this. This work is over 10 years old! And I think was the first thing I ever published on YWS? ...

Sounds like I have some rewording to do in a future iteration! If I add something about Sera being surprised at how good Ben is at catch, and that she ...

"In the buff" is a somewhat roundabout way of saying someone's got no clothes on... So yes, it is innuendo in this case. I'm so glad you like Kyle! Finding ...

I do feel I should give you the warning that I initially had the idea of this being a five-book thing, and that Kyle's secrets would not come out until ...

omg wow you are really making your way through these! I am lowkey still working on this project... just haven't uploaded in a hot minute. Maybe if you make it ...

OMG thank you!! You know I could have sworn I made that an em-dash. Maybe I need to double check my autocorrect/shortcuts...