Ventomology

Hello there! It's not often I see prologues left so long in the Green Room. Please allow me to remedy that for you. (Granted, one of those comments should have ...

Hello there! I know it's a tad late, but welcome to YWS! I've always been a sucker for good mysteries, so this certainly caught my attention. It'll be interesting to ...

I am going to very slowly make my way through the chapters I missed in no particular order... Now then, like Timmy said, this is pretty great in terms of ...

Hello there! It's been a while since I reviewed your work, hasn't it? My apologies. Anyways, having jumped back into the fray, it appears that the quest in the modern ...

Hello there! I have returned for chapter 2! Now then, contrary to Tay's statement, I agree with the sound-only parts. It shows Christine's in-out consciousness, and is a commonly used ...

Oh my god. I cannot tell you how happy I am to see this. I don't often review poetry, but because my best friend is a bassoonist (which makes me ...

Hello there! What an interesting start to a short story. (By short, how many parts are you thinking?) Anyways, before I give out compliments, please allow me to point out ...

I'm back! Finally! I am so sorry for not getting around to this until now. (My school day is over ten hours long, so... Ugh.) Anyways, moving onto the review. ...

Um... I'm not sure where to start. This was certainly an interesting read, though. A word of advice: This is something I just told someone else, and I think it ...

Heya! I'm back! First, there is a little piece of information that no doubt you will be interested in knowing. When a character talks for a really long time, like, ...

I must know; did you get hydrophobia wrong on purpose? Also, since every other named pokemon so far has something bordering on a pun, I am curious how Will got ...

Back again! What a coincidence. :) Now then... where should I start? There are a few spots where several sentences, all in a row, begin with the exact same word. ...

Back as promised! Now then... The first thing I really noticed was that you don't always transition from description to action very smoothly. For instance, the first two sentences of ...

Yo! The entomology lady is here to review. (Get it? Entomology?) Anyhow, since I don't believe I've ever reviewed your work before, allow me to explain the procedure: I'll give ...

Heya! Interesting story you have going on here... I've never seen anything quite like it. Anyways, before I start screaming about all the good things in here, allow me to ...