Ventomology

Hello there! It's been ages since I saw your work in the Green Room... I'm still a bit fuzzy on some of the plot points and names, even though I ...

I'm surprised this is still in the Green Room, Mister Sorcerer. I feel like someone would have caught it by now. Anyways, since I'm not sure what sorts of general ...

Yo! I hope your reviewing goes well today! (And go Zenith!) Let's cut to the chase, shall we? Note: If you've got a name, use it. I think Timmy pointed ...

Hello there! Sorry it took me so long to get around to this chapter. I was saving it for review day. (I think Tort's was the only one I didn't, ...

What the heck happened between Kamikaz and Mettrick? Honestly, I feel like Fulguro is the only like, normal person sometimes. Anyways, onto the review: Note: I think I told you ...

I BET IT WAS CANNIBALISM. (Err, actually, that would be way too gross. Please don't do that.) Well then... Timmy was pretty thorough with his review, so I'll just make ...

Yo! I come bearing a review. Anyways, moving on. Note: Variety is good in diet and sentence structure. Now, since I tend to start with the subject of my sentences ...

UM, WHAT IS WRONG WITH DARREN?! I should think, given that he knows his dad is a crazy criminal, Darren would have suspected for years that his mom was more ...

UGH. I am a terrible companion for not reaching this sooner. (Not that the boys are any better. Honestly! They should have beaten me to this one.) Anyways, I shall ...

I thought I would hate Kamikaz, but I'm really starting to like her... Anyways, let's move on to the review, shall we? Note 1: Be like Kamikaz, active, not passive. ...

Yo! I am actually getting around to a review early in the week. How surprising. Anyways, I shall cut to the review immediately. Note: Your vocabulary should make your writing ...

Hello there! I know it's pretty belated, but welcome to YWS! Now then... shall I get on with the review? I usually pick out one or two big ideas I ...

Good day, Hunter! (Might I mention that I saw you online at 20:00, which is 5 am for you? You left something on, didn't you? Waste of electricity!) But I ...

Hello there, Tort! I'm sorry it took me like, all week to finally get here. (Don't worry though, I still haven't even read Hunter's chapter.) Anyways, it looks like things ...

Heya! I have (finally) arrived. Anyways, I'll get on with the party now. Note 1: Don't be afraid to experiment with new devices. Your writing has already improved since chapter ...