Velvet.whispers

hah, thanks to all for the reviews. Apparently the names are problematic, they're a mixture of welsh and old English. I pronounce them as they're written, the "Ae" like Aeneus, ...

Peace girl! So are you! hah, ok yeah, i'll see what i can do.. "practice makes perfect" right? Anyways, i'm still debating whether or not to write something for a ...

Yuh, I guess, snillaz, do you think it should be longer, like more details about every single lie, and building up a world around her, sort of like more Tim ...

Thank you very much!!! Again, I'm still suprised that this has gotten such a welcome! xx

Thanks to all for answering, sorry I've been a bit absent lately... Eraqio and Pringle, this is about the lies not their consequences or other poepl, it's supposed to speak ...

Hah, well if you notice that the While starts with a capital letter, you get that's it's a new setence. "order" is more of an intrerjection. And I did start ...

Hah, thanks tab13, but tell me what's the point of requoting the whole poem? I already know what I wrote!

Gee thanks WhiteTiger93 :D

Thanks to all for the reviews and gold stars!! I have to say I'm rather surprised that this seems to be what has been most appreciated among everything that I've ...

No, i disagree with conrad rice, Having a clear narrative would ruin the evocative poetry of this piece, it's special because we're not quite sure what happened. Th main character ...

Ok I really wanted to review this in detail, but have been beaten to it, To that, I can only express my sincerest regret, my deepest admiration for your wonderful ...

Dear iCarlyfan had you read what is posted above, you would know that this is what is known as a french sonnet, and that for this type of sonnet there ...

Haha you are so gullible, it is rhyme lol xx

Nope it wasn't you, it was June/ spring rain!

haha no darko, i cannot give you my name, that would just ruin all the fun of it! If my screen name is mysterious, it shall remain so! As for ...