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  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Barber

    I agree with everyone else this is short but pretty good, ill never tell you it needs to be better only you can decide if it needs to be better ...

    Oct 5, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The Tears of Pain and Blood

    Just because something rhymes more not doesn't make it good or bad. A poem can have rhyme or not and it still be good. From my experience its hard to ...

    Jul 30, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Underneath My Skin

    To be completly honest i can relate to this poem which sounds kind weird, when you have had a broken heart like mine you never really recover from it but, ...

    Jul 28, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Wondrous World

    Really good I must say, simple but strong. It doesn't mater how long or short it is, simple or strong, what maters is what it means and how it is ...

    Jul 28, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Cat Steps Chapter 1: Draft

    I can honestly say this is a really good beginning to a great book, I haven't found myself reading every single word in years. When someone like me can read ...

    Jul 25, 2010


You have to be a bit of a liar to tell a story the right way.
— Patrick Rothfuss, The Name of the Wind