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Re: Barber
I agree with everyone else this is short but pretty good, ill never tell you it needs to be better only you can decide if it needs to be better ...
Oct 5, 2010 -
Re: The Tears of Pain and Blood
Just because something rhymes more not doesn't make it good or bad. A poem can have rhyme or not and it still be good. From my experience its hard to ...
Jul 30, 2010 -
Re: Underneath My Skin
To be completly honest i can relate to this poem which sounds kind weird, when you have had a broken heart like mine you never really recover from it but, ...
Jul 28, 2010 -
Re: Wondrous World
Really good I must say, simple but strong. It doesn't mater how long or short it is, simple or strong, what maters is what it means and how it is ...
Jul 28, 2010 -
Re: Cat Steps Chapter 1: Draft
I can honestly say this is a really good beginning to a great book, I haven't found myself reading every single word in years. When someone like me can read ...
Jul 25, 2010
