Veerocious

I liked the idea of the story and maybe its just me, but some of the things in the story didn't quite add up. I'm very confused about the note ...

this was nice and your "seamed" should be "seemed"... I was wondering about something though.... How can the queen know the name of Rumpelstiltskin? I thought she sent men to ...

I love the idea you have in this poem.. but in this phrase here: And pushes me further back, Into a echoless abyss. Into an echoless abyss. I agree that ...

It would help if you placed more punctuation marks in your piece. Such as these lines: They don’t need me I am an addition It would help if you placed ...