Vasticity

the only thing i learned from supernatural is to not keep going for 10 seasons

Don't steal jokes from Calvin and Hobbes... that's just rude. :evil:

Cres, if you had looked down a tiny bit more, you would've seen this:

sorry to hear that. :(

but most people making the movies are in it for the money and fame. I'm not really like that. It's kind of sad what's happening to the condition of movies. ...

Well, I fixed certain elements that were wrong with the script, but here's what I didn't. You still have entire enter spaces between the names and dialogue. Yeah, my script-writing ...

I don't mean to offend, I was just telling you what was wrong and what was right. I like it. You're taking an interesting turn on a traditional story, but ...

yeah, I screwed up the blood thing, so i'm going to cut that out. But... and i've done a lot of research on this, patients will commonly pass out if ...

I would be interested to hear what kind of music would be playing while this happened. um... orchestral music. I'm a composer, so i'm going to write it, after the ...

Thank you!!! I wasn't really expecting any approvals... :lol:

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