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I'm accepting all criticisms and approvals. Please note that I do not write books, I'm more into movie scripts. Since there isn't really a section for that, I've decided to ...

I'm still accepting all criticisms and approvals. So give me more, MORE!Scene two(We fade in from black to Jeff, staring blandly. The camera turns around to see what he is ...

Timepiece (scene three)(We open to Jeff, sitting on the couch, drinking a glass of water, with James and Charles standing in front of him)Charles:What is the big issue with you? ...

Timepiece (SCENE FOUR)(We cut to Brian and Charles walking up towards the door. Brian opens the door and is about to step out, but he turns around to face Charles)BRIAN:Charles, ...

Due to a sudden drop in actors, I had to rewrite. 3 characters have been taken from the film.SCAVENGERS (SCENE ONE)(We open to an empty field, wind rushing through the ...

Due to a drop in actors, I had to rewrite. 3 Characters have been taken from the film.SCAVENGERS (Scene Two)(We fade in to a first-person shot of a ceiling. Cody ...

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Due to a drop in actors, I had to rewrite. 3 characters have been taken from the film.Scavengers (Scene three)(We cut to Adrian, sleeping in his bed. He rolls over, ...

Due to a drop in actors, I had to rewrite. Three characters have been taken from the film.SCAVENGERS (Scene Four)(We fade in to Calvin and Norman, walking down a long ...

Due to a drop in actors, I had to rewrite. Three characters have been taken from the film. Scavengers (Scene Five)(We cut to Adrian and Cody, in the garage. Adrian ...

Due to a drop in actors, I had to rewrite. Three characters have been taken from the film.Scavengers (Scene Six)(Adrian and Cody walk down the straightaway that leads to the ...

Due to a drop in actors, I had to rewrite. Three characters have been taken from the film.Scavengers (Scene Seven)(Calvin walks down an empty hall. You can hear shouting in ...

This is my last try on The Obscured, and then I'm giving up.THE OBSCURED (Scene One)(Open to binary code, moving across the screen. The camera zooms in, and the words ...

The Obscured (Scene two)(Eclipse walks towards the thicket of trees, stops, and looks around for a few moments)ECLIPSE: Hello? Mist? Miasma? Oh, crap.(Eclipse pulls a cell-phone from his pocket and ...

Due to a drop in actors, I had to rewrite. Three characters have been taken from the film.Scavengers (Scene Eight)(We fade to an empty patch of gravel. A foot suddenly ...

Due to a drop in actors, I had to rewrite. Two characters have been taken from the film.Scavengers (Scene Nine)(Norman and Calvin put on their boots. After they finish tying ...

Scavengers (Scene Ten)[Slow-Motion: Adrian carries Cody's body down the staircase, and walks past the camera. We cut to him taking Calvin's pulse. He looks up at the man beside him ...

ERADICATION (Scene One)(We open to a glass of red wine, which is trembling slightly. Suddenly, a hand reaches out, and lifts the glass out of the camera's view. We cut ...

ERADICATION (Scene Two)(We cut to a folder being dropped onto a table. We zoom out to reveal Evan Rand, sitting down in front of the table. The camera zooms out ...

I know this seems really short, but when the movie actually comes out, it's a lot longer than it seems. Just review what you can. ERADICATION (Scene Three)(We fade in ...

ERADICATION (Scene Four)(We cut to Keith, who is sitting on a chair, in a dimly-lit room, reading a book. He reaches over, and pulls a cell-phone from a table. He ...

EXT. GRAVEYARD-EVENINGRain begins to fall from a dark, overcast sky, onto a crowd of funeral-goers, standing in front of a closed casket. The people open up black umbrellas and cover ...

INT. NATHANIEL'S HOUSE-MIDNIGHTNathaniel opens the door that leads into his home. The lights are all shut off. He drops a bag that he was carrying onto the floor, and turns ...

INT. NATHANIEL'S BEDROOM-DayNathaniel is sitting on his bed, reading the manual closely.ALAN (V.O.)Now, before this book ends, I'd like to bring a few things to your attention. Number one--This is

EXT. CITY STREET-DAYSANDRA MITCHELL walks down the sidewalk. She approaches a telephone pole with a piece of paper stuck on it. The paper reads:'Attention, all film enthusiasts! Have you ever ...

INT. ITALIAN RESTURAUNT-DAYNathaniel walks up to a table in the middle of a resturaunt. A few employees are shouting things in Italian. Nathaniel takes his seat, and Alan enters the ...

INT. WAREHOUSE-NIGHTNathaniel unlocks the door to the MED room and steps inside. He takes a seat in front of the computer desk. He pushes a button on the table. The ...

INT. MED CYLINDER-MORNINGNathaniel steps inside his MED cylinder. A feedback sound screeches, and Logan clears his throat over the P.A.NATHANIELSet up yet, Logan?LOGANReady out here.NATHANIELOkay, I f

Let me just start off by saying I've never written anything but scripts except for the YWS Olympics and something when I was like 5, so this is probably terrible, ...