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About the "evoking emotions" part, I'm not exactly good at evoking a feeling into the reader. I'll definitely work on that though. I intentionally placed those words frequently throughout to ...

Oh boi First of all, thanks for the feedback. Second, the "lack of profanity" it was referring to was more of a sort of "throwing away" of the narrator's previous ...

I always try to keep things a little vague to give the reader something to think about rather than telling them exactly what I'm saying.

I'll momentarily step away from my attitude that you're attempting to be an asshole, because it's very likely that you're not. I have a few questions for you. 1) Since ...

Yeah, most of your assumptions were correct aside from the perspective. I don't exactly plan on doing second person, nor a "Choose Your Own Adventure" novel. The second person perspective ...

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There is one word to describe this poem: NOICE! I personally agree with this, that the sun is pretty freaking horrible. Generally, I don't like light at all, but since ...

I'd do that, but I dont think Id want to go to that much trouble. Thanks for the tip tho.

Yeah, I should probably change it to "while Michael and I" because I see where you could get confused. And there'll be a new chapter or two every few days.

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*reviews this because why the hell not* This is so incredibly short and repetitive. I might have to demonstrate how repetitive it is.This is so incredibly short and repetitive. I ...

Wouldn't be a haiku if it had more words.

This is mostly correct, however I'm not too sure what you mean about the "unpredictable" part and how that is the main theme. It revolved around the color red and ...

Sorry for the extremely late reply, I've been off this summer so I haven't looked at this much. You noticed exactly what I wanted to emphasize, which is awesome. Thanks ...

Lots of late replies from me today, I apologize for that. I've been off since summer started. About the flag statement, I do agree on that, however I'm not sure ...

Tis cool, my friend.

Another super late reply on my part, and apologies for that, but thanks for the feedback. I haven't really been on here much since the Summer started, I just got ...