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Re: Dream Catcher Chapter 1
I really want to read more! This is great!!
Jan 4, 2013 -
Re: He is just so peculiar [01]
I should offer you a review, but I honestly like this too much to rip it apart yet. I want to read more!
Aug 10, 2012 -
Re: Consumed
*I also wanted to add I didn't really read over this much before submitting it. It's not done in a proper format, and that is entirely on purpose.
Mar 5, 2012 -
Re: Reach: Chapter 2
Yes. I am glazing over the characters at the moment. That's purposefully done. I want to build up the charactes as the book goes on. I like it when descriptions ...
Aug 23, 2011 -
Re: Changes
This is great! I think that it's well done, despite the fact it's really sad. Sorry, this isn't much of a review, but I wanted to tell you I think ...
Aug 19, 2011 -
Re: Why am I a Christian?
Grabbed me. Amazing.
Jun 1, 2011 -
Re: Alone
Haha, Snoink, my spelling is pretty consistent till you throw the "ie"s at me. I'm a total loss when it comes to remembering which word should have an "i" before ...
May 31, 2011 -
Re: Alone
Thank you so much for the feedback guys! Justtrying, thanks for the input on structure! I should be shooting for that kind of thing... HessicaJolt, that's exactly what the poem ...
May 31, 2011 -
Re: Because I'm a Christian
Well said! I think the world needs to learn a few things from this. As well as many Christians. Very, very well said.
May 4, 2011