Vanz

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Thank you for the review! I admit it's overtly dense, I wanted it to feel close, intimate and above all suffocating. Seems I crossed into a different domain where it ...

Thank you for your review, finally someone that put the finger on the sore spot(s). I knew something felt off, but wasn't able to pin point anymore. Again, thank you!

I read your review and here's my reply: I indeed have committed the crime of info-dump and should've smeared this across the story. Thanks for pointing it out. I do ...

Thanks for the pointers, appreciate it. Well, as stated in previous reply I might make a bit of a series of it. Yet where to start.

Thanks for your amazing reply! I must say that this one kept me busy for -quite the long- while. Yes the horse in the beginning.. Good question, crossed my mind ...

I must say that I'm quite impressed. After the second read-through it began to "sing". Also the way it tends to play with the given view on the lyrics it ...

Also, why do the walls randomly fall on her? "The very vibrations of her agonized screams shook the castle walls to such extent that they started to crumble." (Which consecutively ...