VanillaXKnight

Thank you!

Thank you, Honora! I'll keep your valuable criticisms in mind!

Thanks for the review! Yes there were many plot holes because I didn't have that much focus on the story, but on the rhyme scheme. This is my first time ...

Thanks for the review! Yes there were many plot holes because I didn't have that much focus on the story, but on the rhyme scheme. This is my first time ...

Thank you for the review! This poem started out as an experiment if I could do what O.W Holmes did, then I developed it. I had many ideas on how ...

Hi! Thank you for the review and I'm glad you liked the poem! I'll admit I had to put up some unecessary adjectives and changed some tenses just to keep ...

I like this :)

Thanks for reviewing! I really appreciate it :). I'm glad you have no problems with my story. I'll keep working on my tenses! Hope to see you reviewing on my ...