Vandria

Thank you both for reviewing my work. You really helped me out with editting. I don't exactly have an eye for detail... I honestly don't know why the 3/4 thing ...

Thank you very much, everyone. Your comments helped me. And yes... I suppose it is a bit boring in the beginning. xDD Sorry about that. And thank you about the ...

Thank you so much! :D You really gave me some great idea's, and I think I'll try to go back over my work a little slower. :lol: And I could ...

Thank you. I'm sorry if I sounded like I wasn't trying to take criticism, I didn't mean to be that harsh. :( But thank you again for your help, I ...

Um... Thank you for the review, but I did answer the question. :lol: Notice in the last verse I say 'True beauty is the mind'. :lol: The poem was just ...

Thank you! All of your tips helped me. As I reread the first verse of the first poem... Yeah, that doesn't rhyme. xD And its nice to finally find someone ...

Thank you! I read that you saw no that in grammar too? I forgot to use spellcheck, therefore alot of things went bad. :) But thanks again for the review!

The only thing I found odd was that a purple birdleft blue feather? Haha! But I absoloutly loved it! So funny! Favorite line: Jimmy-Who was that? Marie- Those were the ...

Haha! That was a neat piece. The talking was very believable as to what they'd say. Addie seems like a big trouble maker to me! xD The ending was funny. ...

Thank you! :D Sadly, poetry is my weakness. But I understand where your coming at. It is just like others. I'm not exactly an outcast, therefore my poem has no ...

Thank you! Your all so nice. I'm trying to find spellcheck on here...If anyone could let me know where it is, that'd be great! lolz I was actually just really ...

Thank you for helping me out. I know the spelling errors and stuff shouldn't be excused, but I actually copied that off of another website I wrote it on. I ...