Vampyre

Hey :) Here comes the Vamp for a review! I'm sorry for the loss of your mother, and I'm really glad you chose to write about it. I really like ...

Here's the Vamp, come to review :P First, title really caught my eye :) Very nice. Legend: Blue - Spelling/grammar mistakes Green - Things I would change Red - Comments ...

Wow. That is actually really, really good. I can't really do a review of it, because I don't notice anything to say that hasn't been said - that perhaps a ...

Hey! First of all, the name really caught my eye, but whether that's due to a good title choice, or the fact I saw "Vampyre" I'm not sure... Anyway. I ...

I loved this. I really, really loved it. Being someone who has been in that situation before, you captured the emotions perfectly. It's deep and meaningful...just beautiful. There are a ...

I really enjoyed this - it's one of those poems which seems to be deeper than the words on the page. It was meaningful, and really made me think as ...