Vampirewolf3

Well, I think that this story should probably be under "Fan Fiction." Also, try considering copyright problems. One more thing, some people might not understand the complicated politics of "Warcraft."

Spelling errors in writing is (pauses to think, then falls asleep). Oh yes, flies. Little, tiny things that are somehow extremely annoying. "So annoying, yet so little!" screamed the frustrated ...

Info dump....thanks for the "info" "dump" about info dumps.

Thanks for all of the critics that have come to invade my post! :D Did I mention...thanks? Well, even if I did, thanks. P.S. Hunerzero, I changed that little bug.

I guess that the first paragraph would be the prologue. The time period is sort of...time-less, but probablyt most like medival.

Yay! Spruced up is the 2nd revision!

erm...thanks for all the comments ill work on it

The tag read: Pixie Chief of of Development Section Two Yeah. I agree with Pixie: Chief of of Development does sound awkward. Other than that, I liked it.