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  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Good Byes Are Harder Than Hellos.

    It was cute, but sometimes it did seem a bit forced. I quite liked that last line, although the penultimate line did seem a bit similar to the first line ...

    Nov 4, 2007
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Repunzal's Story

    Cute piece, but I agree with what all them lot up there *points* said about the forced rhyming. I hate having to write a rhyming poem, and when we have ...

    Nov 4, 2007
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Fingering A Gun

    A while a go not far from here, Surely this should be ' A while ago '. His face was sad, with a tear on his face , Do you ...

    Nov 4, 2007


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