Utopia

I have written more but under a new name. If you read my story Redwing, you will find this woven into it and the characters a little bit more developed.

Thanks Timmy. I was struggling a bit with the conversations and you were completely right with them getting confusing.

Thanks for the review! Did I not mention that the bottom half of the pods were glass and the top half were glass so they couldn't really see from the ...

The poem is about beggars who beg in front of a church. From there, they see many people like the doctor, then they see a poor mother with an injured ...

Thanks for the review! When Bridget mumbled: "What on earth is going on up there?%u2019%u2019 I think she means: "What on earth went on up there that made Universe lose ...

By the way- I wanted to add more onto the mission so chapter 4 is an extra, with the girls actually doing the mission. The plot has changed a lot ...

Thanks for the review! I did think this chapter was a little to 'talkie', perhaps I'll read through it and see what I can do. By the way- I wanted ...

And then there were three. I really liked this chapter segment, especially when you were describing all the three children mourning. Rest in peace Aoi. It must be hard for ...

Hahahaha! I've never seen the lego movie, perhaps I ought to watch it... I'll try to make it more clear that the girls are back in the chute room. Thanks

Wow, this is amazing and definitley not what I expected. It really spoke to me, someone needs to know Jesus really well to write about him like this!

It's okay, I know my grammar is terrible! Page's 'book box' allows her to think up any book she wants on any subject and it will instantly appear. It's like ...

Thanks for the review. I guess I am a bit "I'' obsessed with my work.

Thanks for the review! I needed to find another way to take out all those I's!

Great poem! I loved the rhythm of the poem and it's hilarious content. (Personally, I think it's Once Upon a Time the queen watches)

Utopia Dreamworld, here. What a glorious way to end such a fantastic book! I will miss waking up every Saturday and reading about Maria and Ben, running around on crazy ...