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Thank you so much :D

Hey defiantAuthoress (cool name by the way) I'm not entirely sure what i was trying to do but I'm still trying to come up with a good way of rhyming ...

Thanks. The title was a really random one, i'll probably end up changing it about 5 times knowing me me but thanks for the advice

Ok, you are officially the nicest person i have ever read a review from. Thanks for the critique it means a lot, and i'll take it all into consideration

Thanks :D It's a first draft so i need to go through and change certain bits of it but thanks, i probably would of missed them. :D

Thank you so much, it was kind of the first poem I've ever actually written so i defiantly need to improve. Thanks again for the feed back

Thanks for the feed back. I'm not the best at choosing the correct punctuation or spelling very well

That is the longest review I've ever seen. It brings up some good points and i get them. Thanks for the tips it's a first draft so i knew it ...

thanks:D

Thanks, i understand that it isn't detailed in the slightest, i'm currently working on something else but i'll come back to this soon so i'll let you know what happens, ...

thanks for the review, but she isn't on a phone. She is simply narrating this section, but i hear what you mean it isn't detailed and i could definatly improve ...

Thank you very much, and awesome first review. this is a story I started a while ago but I'm trying to redo it so thanks for the pointers. And Thanks ...

thanks :D

Thank you, I'll take it in to account. I'm still learning so thanks for the advice :D

thanks, i was looking though my folders and found it, hopefully i will improve it but thanks you :D