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I really like this! It has a good balance between conversation and imagery. Since I haven't read the beginning, I am kind of confused. And just a random question, but ...

This is very creepy and confusing. That is all I have to say. I understand the confusing part, this isn't the whole story. But the creepy part, I don't know ...

I really love how you concluded the story. The part where you are explaining the portrait though, could use some work. It's not like it has bad description or anything, ...

I am a little confused about the man, does he symbolize something in the story? And if she knew he was there, why was she so scared when she saw ...

I love it! Please write more, and if you do, will it be about him not in the mortal world? Or will he come back to life, so that's based ...

This is very interesting...I LOVE IT! It is so capturing and its shows so much emotion. I am just wondering if any of your emotions are rubbing off on this. ...

This is amazing, the description flowed greatly and I even felt scared... Weird I know... I would totally read this book! I am guessing that if you made this a ...

In the beginning I wouldn't straight away say army, I would kind of hint at it until the middle. That makes it more mysterious. Anyways, I really like the title, ...

Oh my gosh write more!!!! This is amazing! It has great description, and gives the reader extended imagery. I could hear and feel and see everything like I was there. ...