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Beautiful!!!!!! The description and conversations flowed AMAZINGLY! You had just enough conversations, and then with all of that description it was like-WOW. Not only that! The conversations didn't le

This was good! But like every single sroty, yes even your favorite there is some minor flaws. For example, this sentence "I'M ALL READY LATE SO I'D BETTER NOT SLACKEN ...

I liked this! Was it hard not being able to use E's? I wouldn't be able to at all, not for one second! The only thing I would mention would ...

I loved this short story! It was very interesting and captivating! The ending was a suprising sick twist. I had a favorite line, "My doubts fall away, and I stand ...

"I've never fought such a brutal foe. It's like they fight entirely on instinct." I love this sentence, it is basic and supreme in action at the same time. "I'll ...

For some reason this reminds me of TFIOS. Maybe instead of Okay or Always. I really like it! This would be a perfect valentines present or birthday present. It is ...

This is a great start (I haven't read the first chapter)! It is very nicely organized and I like the plot. I just have a few things to say. First ...

This is beautiful! The description is amazing and I love the Forest Gump reference in the beginning. I just don't don't know if I can take anymore sappy things after ...

This is amazing and very unique! I really like it! My favorite part is the last three paragraphs. They had great imagery and were very captivating. The beginning part was ...

I really like dramatic, war poetry like this, and this one is one of the more interesting ones. I like how you say it a lot referring to some unknown ...

I LOVE THE LAST SENTENCE!!!!! Excuse me for being loud... I also love how it says "She found it." If this was a movie i would here dun dun dunnnnnnnnnnnnn! ...

I don't really do poetry, so I wouldn't really take my advice. But I will try! On the sixth line it say's know twice I would try to find a ...

I like this, we both write kind of the same thing, but kind of different. I like to make my chapters long and so do you. This is very good, ...

I really like this! She is quirky and that is the kind of character that people like and get attached too! I like the idea of her either trying to ...

I love the concluding sentence, it was so captive and for some reason I kept reading it and saying it, reading it and saying it. Actually the thing was captive. ...