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Re: Protector #1
Wow, I've got to say that this is very amazing. I love that it is easy to visualise where the story takes place and what is going on. The relationship ...
Jun 3, 2017 -
Re: Ode to Donald Trump
I really, really love this poem. It's very hilarious and I died laughing because of this. You perfectly described Donald Trump's true nature like he only wants to use a ...
Jan 3, 2017 -
Re: Tootsie Pop Commercial
Not gonna lie, this poem is really great! However, there are a few grammatical mistakes. The "i"s need to be capitalised since it's referring to yourself. Also, the very first ...
Jan 3, 2017 -
Re: A Love With a Taste Of Blues
Let me start off by saying that this poem is great! I love how you've written this poem: it's short, descriptive and it's very vivid to imagine what is happening. ...
Jan 3, 2017 -
Re: One More Time with Feeling
This is very well written, I can tell that this story has a lot of effort in it. I like that there is a tension of Gia demanding for a ...
Jan 3, 2017 -
Re: An Absence of Light, Part 1 (REVISED)
I really like your story, it has a lot of depth with feelings, it helps to visualize how the characters are feeling. I like the transition of Xander feeling fine ...
Jan 3, 2017
