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  • Short Story » General, General Re: Protector #1

    Wow, I've got to say that this is very amazing. I love that it is easy to visualise where the story takes place and what is going on. The relationship ...

    Jun 3, 2017
  • Poetry » Satire, General Re: Ode to Donald Trump

    I really, really love this poem. It's very hilarious and I died laughing because of this. You perfectly described Donald Trump's true nature like he only wants to use a ...

    Jan 3, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Satire Re: Tootsie Pop Commercial

    Not gonna lie, this poem is really great! However, there are a few grammatical mistakes. The "i"s need to be capitalised since it's referring to yourself. Also, the very first ...

    Jan 3, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: A Love With a Taste Of Blues

    Let me start off by saying that this poem is great! I love how you've written this poem: it's short, descriptive and it's very vivid to imagine what is happening. ...

    Jan 3, 2017
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Romantic Re: One More Time with Feeling

    This is very well written, I can tell that this story has a lot of effort in it. I like that there is a tension of Gia demanding for a ...

    Jan 3, 2017
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: An Absence of Light, Part 1 (REVISED)

    I really like your story, it has a lot of depth with feelings, it helps to visualize how the characters are feeling. I like the transition of Xander feeling fine ...

    Jan 3, 2017


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