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Re: The Ascension- Chapter One
God, this story sucks. Worst story I've ever read in my life. How can someone write this bs? Why and how? xD jk Alright, like I've said before (or I ...
Apr 2, 2021 -
Re: Eyes
The picture is amazing. How in all hell did you take it? I could seriously look at it for ages. Anyway, here is my review. The imagery of this whole ...
Apr 1, 2021 -
Re: The Year of the Rat Kings
Hey What a 'short' story. Probably the biggest short story I have ever seen. I love the first paragraph, could not find anything to comment on at all. I especially ...
Apr 1, 2021 -
Re: That blue eyed boy
Hi, Nice little poem. The free verse scheme works pretty good. A suggestion though would be turning it into a Haiku. According to my own count, the first three lines ...
Mar 31, 2021