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Re: To Maggie
Lovely. The death/normality imagery was gorgeous, such as 'doorstep', ( I assume it means gravestone?) which gave blurred areas between what was happening and made the poem able to be ...
Feb 5, 2014 -
Re: Smiles of the Weak
I love the imagery in this, such as 'shields against fear' and 'nightmare of children'. It gives the air of darkness and cruelty which is very prevalent throughout the poem. ...
Feb 5, 2014 -
Re: fallen leaves have stories
This is gorgeous. I love the alliteration of 'siesta in the sunlight', especially in context, as it really speaks to me about the transition of summer/fall. The final few lines ...
Feb 5, 2014
