TylynRae

Tigersprite: Thanks for the review first of all. =] I'm glad to see the positive reactions. I like some of the suggestions that you made, and other's I wasn't quite ...

=] Go jewishness! I like your style by the way. It's pretty rad.

@ kirstenailene50878 Thank you so much for your review =] I try as often as I can to get a reaction like yours, and like everyone else that has reviewed ...

I thought that the message was good but I just couldn't find a good rhythm with it =\. It felt like you were trying to rhyme but not at the ...

@ animekaratepup, that was exactly what I was going for =] I mean, 'a very sad poem that reads in a fun way' It's a sort of signature thing I ...

Doxie00, the point of the poem was to void out emotions completely and just see what's happening. This is a very different writing style than what I usually use, but ...

I really love this piece. House of Cards, brilliant title and it's just coming from a different angle. It's been forever since I've read a piece that's abstract and modern ...

Ok, animekaratepup. Thanks for the review, firstly. And I'll definitely take your advice on this one. I'll have to admit that grammar and punctuation is my weak point. So thank ...

I like this a lot. The style in general is great, its not too wordy or too simplistic. Its wonderful =]