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Rascalover, thank you! That is exactly what I've been looking for. I'm absolutely awful with punctuation, so thank you so much for that =] I'll get on it as soon ...

Well put WTMeighan =]. I agree with you entirely.

Thanks for the review Shear =] I'm glad you liked it. And to answer your question, I don't know why he changed either. I have no idea what happened. This ...

Thank you kimkim and I would like to point out to perdidooooo, this lovely comment that you left me. =] Thank you!

Calm down, Perdido. I understand that it was all good natured, and I was harsh back, like I said I was. My ego is NOT large, but you did make ...

About that... it started out fiction, but then i completely restarted and I have no idea which category it should be under... By the way, now that I know what ...

@ Perdido, again. This wasn't a story. This was a letter I wrote to my dad. You seem to just be totally ripping on people today, huh? But I will ...

@ perdido. I messaged you originally because you had given a pretty tough comment to a friend of mine and she didn't know why. I then told her that I ...

Thank you so much xDudettex for reviewing! I'm glad that you enjoyed this piece. =] I've been requesting reviews because I think that the rating and the topic in general ...

WTMeighan! You read it =]. Thank you so much for the review. I absolutely love the feed back that I've been receiving. I'm sitting in class right now absolutely gushing ...

With the second one, lol, I'd cut it down a bit, it gets almost too long. But other than that it's good. You're already getting better with detail! =]

:D Thank you SmylinG for the wonderful review. I'm really happy with what people are saying about my work and your review really made my day. I'm just... completely humbled ...

Thanks for reviewing! I don't think too many people will take this story too well because it is very graphic. And I do realize all too well that women cheat ...

to everyone that has reviewed thanks for your response =] @ Formslipper: I'm not looking for true love, this isn't about an exboyfriend that I want back or for any ...

I liked this piece, the set up made me think of emily dickinson because she too didnt go for the conventional rhyming and then ending of a stanza. It's a ...