Tylexie

Thanks you so much! :) I really like your interpretation of this, and I appreciate your thoughts!

Thank you! Looking back, I agree with what you said about the 4th stanza. I'll try to think of something I can do to change it.

Thanks! I think it'll be interesting to see different interpretations of this. I'd never thought of it that way before I read your review.

I almost cried reading this.

I know it's very late, but thanks! I wrote this late at night and trying to distract myself, so I didn't know how it would turn out :). I'll go ...

Thank you very much for the review! I appreciate your help, and I'll definitely go back and try to fix it. :)

I'm glad to hear that :)

Thank you. I will be sure to go over this and see if I can add more descriptive language :)

Thank you so much! I really appreciate it.

Ok, I will read it.

You're welcome!

Nice! I can't really see any more errors now that grammar is fixed. Your writing style is really satisfying; I've gotten too used to stumbling writing that doesn't properly convey ...

THIS IS SO BEAUTIFULLY RANDOM. It's amazing.

You're welcome! I'm glad to have been able to help. As long as grammar exists, I will exist... haha not really; that'd be a long and boring life filled with ...

Thank you for the input! I'll make sure to look back and see if I can change a few things.