Tyler

This was very well written. I liked the writing, the way it drew you in as the character. Made you think like him, feel what he was feeling. Be careful ...

Ok now I just wanna give you a giant hug and be your best friend... I loved it!That sounds really wrong but I'm glad you look at it positively now. ...

Ok so I realize this is a bit late but what the hay, I review anyway! Hey that rhymed.... I loved your prologue. It's a little difficult reading real time ...

Ahaha so this is what the competition looks like. All I have to say is, wow! You have extraordinary talent for poems. I was so drawn in and it read ...

Ok so it's probably been a while since you posted this but I'll review anyways. I didn't have too much to say and I didn't want to be too detailed ...

Umm........... wow...... I loved it! Great work! It's amazing to find so much talent on this site from such young writers. YOU JUST STARTED TYPING THAT!?!?! I could have sworn ...

Hey there! Mmk so I loved the tension and the mystery here! You started it great, very gripping. I must say, it was a bit rough and kinda choppy but ...

Hello there! I loved this work! Now, I'm not much into poems, I rarely read them and I've never written them so my help will be limited... :/ Ok so ...

Wow! I must confess I wasn't expecting much but you blew me away! This was absolutely Brilliant! I loved it! You have a lot of talent! As for any critiques, ...

Hey there Pink! I love your work, very imaginative. Your writing is still a little bit rough but who's isn't? ;) I loved it so far, I'm not really a ...

I've heard a story like this! Scared the crap out of me when my buddy told it to me one night! Except it was a girl that had left and ...

Wow! I thought this was very well written and gripping from the start. The tension you started with pulled me in and held me. Great work!Your descriptions are great and ...

Excellent and extremely gripping. The only comments I would have now would be; don't use anyways too much. I sounds more like a teen writing in a diary than someone ...

Hey I really liked it. I'm impressed with your style. First person, real time is extremely hard to do. You pulled it off very well. You had a certain intensity ...

I love the suspense and mystery you have attached. However be very careful with your point of view and character development. These can be extremely difficult in first person present ...