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Re: Mystery Millions Prologue (pI&pII)
Hi Hei, So, I was drawn to this piece because of the title. "Mystery Millions"... I like mystery stories, and while I realize that the use of the word 'mystery' ...
Aug 8, 2012 -
Re: Trade Me: Prologue
A very descriptive piece. I like your style. I have a few nitpicks, but I was very thorough... some of these are really little things. The wind teasingly pulled at ...
Aug 5, 2012 -
Re: Gone from exsistence.
Hello C&L, this is my first review, so bare with me... I liked your chapter here. Your grammar was pretty good... I have a couple of suggestions though: About half ...
Aug 2, 2012