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Re: 8912 Perfect Place
I found one mistake "but we no one". Next to that, it seems fantastic, good job. I love what you have written and where the plot seems to be going. ...
Nov 14, 2007 -
Re: Begining of a novel
Well I've had allot of them up for a long time, and I'm not getting any more replies, so I want to delete those, but it won't let me.
Aug 6, 2006 -
Re: Begining of a novel
It won't let me delete any of my posts please help.
Aug 5, 2006 -
Re: The Masked Crusading: Chapter 1
I think this is really good. If there is a second part I hope to read it.
Aug 5, 2006 -
Re: The Truth About Furby (Pt. 1) & (Pt. 2)
This sounds very interesting. I can't wait to read the second part. be sure to put the unstoppable, except for taking out the batteries, talking.
Aug 5, 2006 -
Re: Beginning of a novel
Yeah sorry about the last sentence it got cut off when I copy and pasted it. :lol: This is how it should go: How dear those days had been to ...
Mar 18, 2006 -
Re: Somtimes, Sometimes
Ok, well I have spaced it out now so hope it looks and sounds better. :P
Feb 23, 2006 -
Re: New Year's Death Song
Yeah, I see what your saying. I will wait one or two more weeks to see if I get any more replies before I post it revised. When I do ...
Nov 8, 2005 -
Re: Times of Sorrow
I am sorry for the confusion. In my profile I accidentally changed the year I was born when I changed it. Thanks for pointing that out, I changed it to ...
Oct 29, 2005 -
Re: Please read and critique! I am starved for an audience.
This is great!!! I love it how you described the feeling of complete and utter sorrow to such a degree. I hope to read more of your writing. Keep on ...
Oct 27, 2005 -
Re: An Ode to Green Day
Your poem is awesome, mostly because it was about Green Day, but don't get me wrong it was still good. P.S. Green Day rocks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Oct 27, 2005 -
Re: Atomic Number 50
[color=cyan]I'm not realy good at lyrics myself, but to me it was great.I hope to read more of your stuff later. :P [/color]
Oct 20, 2005