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I havn't written it yet!! It's in progress, but I've got the next chapter fully planned out, and the next one sketched out. And the whole story... I think this ...

Neat use of flashbacks here; like JC's POD, which is just as good though - :roll: - just as remorseful.

Good beginning. Shows the potential for what happens later.

Very good chapter, and I'm glad you didn't go any further with that flashback. Your writing style is very smooth and easy to read.

Brilliant!! Great! Wonderful retelling, hope you do well, no mistakes spotted here, just short and sweet, this was very well written and funny.

Very good. Sad that this kinda thing happens in real life. Shows what idiots people can be when they're sweet on each other. Morons. Anyway, good chapter, didnt think the ...

I thought twas nice, except for what Jules said about "alone" being all one word. :)

This is good! I haven't read the first bits of this, but this is great. :) What are "strobe lights"?

Thanky, Magicman, fishr and Wiggy! [That about Marion's name, yes, I see what you mean, Wiggy.]

Ain't you flattered, Snoink? :D Mae carnen, Cal!

Ew, nasty green misty thing!! Very good, and Kitty once again has dun her dooty and there's nothin for me to pick out. :)

Romantic poetry? Not my fav by a long shot, but this seemed alright. :)

Well, if this was in a book, a chapter this long would be fine, but on here, it don't half look intimidating. The town's got a "K" name as well. ...

*blinks* I found this confusing. She... has cut herself, loves someone and is following someone who is perhaps the one she loves, who is insubstantial and unclear? :S Sorry, but ...

Was I so tall, could reach the pole, Or grasp the ocean with a span; I would be measured by the soul, The mind's the standard of the man. [The ...