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Hi! I'm sorry this has taken so long to get to. Life, uni, and everything, you know. The tightness of the stanzas makes me feel like this poem could do ...

Hi Dude! (I am so late, I’m really really sorry.) Juliana exhaled as she examined the three pages her completed letter. Missed out word? Juliana stood slowly as she brushed ...

Hi Vyper! I’m so sorry I’ve taken forever with this. I’m appalling. >_< I took a deep breath, keeping my face completely void of emotion, struggling to keep from getting ...

Hi littleole! I’m so sorry it’s taken so long to catch up with this; uni’s been busy. The crunch of my heart was almost audible, like a kosher pickle under ...

Hi again Dude! Isn’t this far enough? Lucian thought. “Where are we going Radi?” Why are we given Lucian’s thought? I’m not liking the POV switch. Although there are books ...

Hi Dude! Muchos apologies for lateness. Uni’s a pig. >_< “Hey! Juliana…. Hey, wake up!” Radi said as he shook his sister gently . “Are you hungry?” The bolded bit ...

Hi summergrl! I’m terribly sorry this has taken so long to get to. Family’s been away and uni’s started up again, and things have been very blahmehfoo lately. “No. She ...

Hi DiskElemental! Without blinking she began to speak, “it’s Thursday, doctor, we both know what that means. “ This could be made more direct. Why do you need to say ...

Yosemite Skins! No one’s seen Zack since the party five weeks ago, not even Robbie, and practically everyone I’ve come across have come up with theories. The “not even Robbie” ...

Hai Skins! Sorry for the delay; I had to replenish my supply of acid, but now I shall vomit it all over your foot. Sometimes I’ll be standing somewhere and ...

Hi smusch! When she sat down across from him, he watched how her blue-sky dress wrinkled and twisted, but he never saw the finger that she was missing. He sat ...

Hi Vyper! “Touché.” She spoke a sentence in perfect Ecnarian, leaving me staring at her stupidly. She giggled. “Don’t switch languages, unless you’re fluent in both.” So, Ecnarian = Frenc

Hi Vyper! I scoffed, “Jeez, you fall back asleep one time and he never lets you live it down.” Setting. “Jeez” as a minced oath is very modern American, and ...

Hi! Giles sighed an rested his face on his hand. Typo. The other man cut in as he unscrewed the jar of salt. "It heals wounds doesn't it? Why then ...

Hi again! It was not an unusual to find Kaval here, or any place resembling it for that matter. Missed out something? Now, at the ripe age of thirty seven, ...