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I is awfully late. *hangs head in shame* I'd forgotten about my Bite thread, and last time I checked it, there weren't any new requests. :oops: Melissa stood quietly by ...

But the sound came from a fellow laborer bent under a load of bricks, his steps slow against the beat of Émon’s heart . This is rather an odd phrase ...

Well... From what I've seen of your writing, you always manage to make prose poetic and add in these little details and images and metaphors that make the whole piece ...

i came back home on Friday, threw my bag onto the bed and immediately called up my friend. "i" should be a capital letter. It might be a good idea ...

Hi NM! Sorry this took so long in coming, and if this is bleary, blame it on the sinuses. Aidan, my blood father, was ready to drain his blood and ...

He doesn't HAVE to go through a sex scene. Personally I hope he doesn't. He could just switch POVs just before it happens and have a line of stars instead. ...

Awww... *goes all gooey* When Mommy and Tim fight, I go outside and sit by the pile. When I first read that, I was like, Pile? Huh? What pile? Perhaps ...

I liked it, it was well written, but you use archaic language, and that always makes me break out in lumps. See here, the language is great. To the point, ...

“Well,” he said, “what do you want?” Coo, um, cheeky much? Jataal tossed Tannar the broadsword he’d admired the other day. Contractions aren’t necessary and shouldn’t be used. “What do

Wuthering Heights stank. Stinks. Stunk. It was completely unbelievable, all about people destroying themselves for love. Catherine decides that she won't marry Heathcliff, but she has to destroy herse

Punctutation is your friend, and you have thrown its friendly overtures aside. my stomach starts growling, in the late afternoon my mother simply says,"supper will be ready soon" Should be, ...

Hi and welcome to YWS! It's not a very good policy to put a poll on your work. It Just Isn't Done. While that is an unwrit rule, one of ...

Hi! Welcome to YWS. First off, it's one of the Rules on here that before you post anything of your own, you have to have reviewed at least two other ...

As this is really long, it'll be in two parts, sa? Nothing could wrong back then, but then, it did. Make it “nothing could go wrong back then…” Too many ...

Personally I don’t quite get why Karenna refused and why Tavrinal actually asked her… :? Boom sat munching leaves at the edge of the Gypsies’ Forest. Munching leaves?? *reads down* ...