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Hi! First off, congrats on having a very cool title. It’s simple and a little obvious, but it drew me in. Reminds me of The Extraordinary and Unusual Adventures of ...

Hi! I have to admit, I am not the best person to review something like this. I loathe Twilight with every part of my soul. I daydream about meeting Stephenie ...

This was very eccentric. This is like the love-child of Alice Through The Looking Glass and Monty Python, which is good, but weird. The world might not be ready for ...

A bump on the shoulder by a stranger caused me to jump and I looked at him with my eyes, which turned bright silver with my anxiety. The power that ...

Hai! First off, you need spacing between your paragraphs, otherwise all I see is a huge block of text with an unfriendly glare. Leave a line between each paragraph and ...

Hi! This was a good story, very hard-hitting and emotional, and you told it well. Even though this was a short piece of writing, I got a good sense of ...

Hi! Twit here to do the reviewin' thing. Woah, dude, first off—spacing! Leave a line between each new paragraph and each line of dialogue, otherwise all I see is one ...

Hai! This was very good; you handled awkward emotions well without overloading into sappitude. There were a few places, however, where I felt your technique was a little off: Strawberries ...

Hey! You have an excellent title for drawing people (well, me) in, and I love the idea of a moonboy and a stargirl, but I don't get what you're trying ...

Hi! I'm not sure what you were trying to communicate here -- at first I thought the fence was civilisation, preventing people from being themselves, but then you introduced the ...

Hey! I liked this poem a lot; it had a good, relevant message with simple, understandable imagery. However, I think that that may work against it as well. Personally, I ...

Hai! :mrgreen: I sat in the corner and watched quietly . The man in the red cloak stood there solemnly , doing nothing. Personally, I don’t like having two adverbs ...

Hai! I see you've only done one review that's showed up on your profile. Try and do more; it's fairer that way, and also means that more people know you ...

Hai! This was good; it was well written and even in such a short piece of writing, there was a nice feel of character voice. *likes* However, I didn't like ...

Hai! I'm not an expert on poetry, but in trying to get better, I'm afraid you're my guinea-pig. :mrgreen: Like Jasmine, I liked the structure of the poem (couplets, apparently), ...