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Hi! I really liked the rhythm of this poem. It had a definite, very strong flow to it, and that was in keeping with the angry, emotional tone. However, I ...

Hai! I haven’t read all of the Harry Potters, so bear with me. I’m not going to go on characters, as I’m not able to judge, but just go on ...

Hi! This is quite short, so I’m going to be very picky about it, cos that’s how one improves, right? ^_^ At least Klaytoni the Great defeated him. I scraped ...

Hai! I'm lolling. Oh yes. It's a pity that I've never even heard of Gatorade before this, so if I ever come across it in the future, I'll only associate ...

Hai! Words take me happens all the time Words take me makes out the crime You need a comma after “take me” on both lines. I get the first line, ...

Yo! “They’re not so little anymore, Rewt,” Azha pointed out softly. “Those pictures are from the old days, before the wars. And you know everyone says they’ve grown a lot ...

Hai! Big white teeth split her milk-stained lips and a touch of cream slipped from the tip of her nose. K, she’s really messy, and the image I have of ...

Hai! The figure flashed her Trident smile at Anna, who stared at her in silent awe. Trident? Like the gum, or like King Neptune? She blinked. Looked up at the ...

Hai! This was beautifully written, Gadzila! It was very poetical and there was some lovely imagery and description. It was quite short, so there wasn't much opportunity for character development, ...

Hi! I really liked this. It was very meaningful, and I liked the vague, detached tone and the rhythm. The repetition of "she's going to be a model" is good ...

Hai! I’m here because I liked your subject description. :mrgreen: I should have read the chapters before this, I guess, but I wanted to see what this was like, so... ...

Hai! I was forum-mooching and suddenly remembered that I’d read the prologue for this story some time ago and wondered if you’d put up anymore. And you have. Which is ...

Hai! This was very well done indeed. Packed with emotion, great writing style, great flow, perfect sense of whatchacallit all the way through. However , although I enjoyed this as ...

Hai! This is an interesting theme; it really is "the thing" to be unique in some weird way nowadays. It's like in TV series -- the protagonist has to be ...

Hai! I didn’t like this that much; not just because I’m not keen on romance, but because—well, because nothing much happened. I wasn’t expecting car-chases and sudden development of super-powe