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Hello! First off, I upped the rating on this to an 18+, because you have a lot of strong swearing in here, and it's always better to rate too high ...

Hello! Sorry I’m rather late to this. Okay, so I’m not going to go through and pick our things on a sentence level, but rather talk about the whole thing. ...

Yello! First off, I didn't like this idea at all. Talking heads don't make something a script. In a script there's stage directions and everything is very visual. Here, you ...

Hello confetti! Thanks for requesting a review, and sorry it’s taken me a while to get round to it... Uni is, as ever, a pig. I think, maybe, your subtlety ...

Hello! Shooing the furry culprit away from the scene of the crime, I received a hiss for my effort before procuring the damaged article. This is very vague language. “Furry ...

Hello! I have very little experience with lyrics, so bear with me. ^_^ I had a date with Time and she's a wicked one to please she drags through every ...

Hai! Sorry this took me a while to get to... Uni’s a pig. 3, 2, 1– ACTION! Leap from building to building. Now down the emergency stairs. Stealth attack from ...

Hello! This was very well written. There was a lot of emotion, and your descriptions and imagery were both very good, very vivid. However (there's always a however. Or a ...

Hello! Daniel Phillips (Dan for short) was a punctual sort of person. Although quiet, easily nerved and prone to panic attacks, Dan meant well to those around him. He had ...

... Hi Well. Um. I'm not sure exactly what to say about this. What are you saying? Unless this is a deep and biting satire, the point of which I've ...

Yello! If you weren't in an area whiter than the pale horse, and colder than it's tiny ice ridden heart Very cool simile, but that should be “its” without an ...

Hello! Like a tiger in a forest, shadowing their pray . Your simile is just about one tiger, so it should be shadowing “its” prey rather than “their” prey because ...

This reads more like a ranting blog post than an actual review, and the language was a bit off-putting. Glad to see that you rated this appropriately, though. ^_^ I ...

The screams poured from every mouth, except mine. Why? They’re just driving along. Constant screaming would drive me crazy, and surely would attract more zombies? The cook put Janey down ...

“I need to find something for this . ” H e said. My mind was slowing at last as reluctantly she put her kindling-arms around my neck. Her what arms? ...