TwistedMuffins

Hallo there! It was really nice! But, you see, the thing is, at the bigenning there was no rhyme and no flow. But then it came and when it did, ...

Oh My God :'D So cute! Right, back to work! This was amazing, just as any of your other works. You see, the thing is Icy, that when you start ...

Yay! Super awesomness! Sorry I didn't check it out earlier, was lazy, but here I am now so lets review! ... Yeah, I promise to never touch the above line ...

*Breathes out* Finally! :'D Just as excepted from you - Brilliant! Okay, some errors : [Ha, guess you really must be fed up of me and my "errors", sorry xD] ...

Oh, ah, wow x) -> It wasn't bad but you did make a lot of errors. Starting with the rating. Personally, I think you should have rated it 15+ or ...

Hey! Life and Time, two of my most favorite topics ever! Though, I liked the Life poem better. :P I guess you could have tried writing it in a four-line ...

Heylo~ Nice, but it was a little confussing. You used "I" where I thought "He" should come. So you might want to cross check the entire thing. Also, there were ...

Heylo Heylo~! That was a really nice and cute poem! But it did have some problems with the flow. Also, try putting the single words in the line. It will ...

Hey there! That was nice! A little mistakes here: Midnight, Brisbane City. The skyscrapers glittered as they reflected the light coming from the cars and shops below. Standing on top ...

Hello there, Vampireacademyfreak3! [I love vampires too! :'D ] Okay, Wow! You said an entire story of two lovebirds in 3 paragraphs! The flow of the poem was perfect. Just ...

IcyFlame~! Another amazing chapter! I found a few errors :- Everyone seemed to joke about how ill The Creator’ ‘minions’ seemed to be and I had laughed along with them, ...

Hello IcyFlame! I was kinda blank here (I havn't read your novel, I'm afraid. But I'm going to!) so I can't excatly talk about the character. But, the writing wasn't ...

Hey Vapor :) I sense darkness and sadness, the same harsh kind I've gone through. But, don't worry. Time heals pains. Time changes a person. Time strenghtens you for the ...

Okay. Wow. Really, to get inspired by a picture and to write it into a poem and to actually say how you feel about it is really nice. Sometimes, for ...

Hey Jalmoc! That. Was. Amazing! I didn't know one could write so well, with so much emotion and thought without actually feeling such love! So, my big question. Have you ...