TwistedMuffins

Hey there! Let me just tell you, I haven't being reviewing for weeks now, so this could be quite, well, bleh. (the best way to put.) Okay, so, I agree ...

Hey there! That was amazing, really. But there were some parts where I had to read over and over again to get it... and some, I still don't. Also, I ...

Hellllo~! That was amazing! Really! (Haha! Love the signature xD Sorry. I know, its random.) Anyways, the only thing was that you changed the scene a bit too fast. The ...

Hey! This is a really nice poem! But the rhyme seemed a little forced, so you might want to work on that. Also, I actually liked this paragraph : I ...

Hello there! I really like this! It was very different from everything else I've read. Errors? Non that I could find. Well, except this: By the time they reached the ...

Hey! That was nice, but an appropriate rating would be much recommened. Also, there were times were your "I"s weren't capitalized, and you ended your " with '. Stick to ...

Alicia said with a smile , this was followed by a series of laughter. I suggest you use "which" instead of "this". Glad to see you still have your sense ...

Hello there! I must say, this was a very very imagnative poem. But it was a bit too rhyme-y (as the person above me said.) And all the mistakes I ...

Alo there! Amazing poem, I must say, espically coming from a twelve year old! As Aadesh said, you shouldn't put a fullstop at every line. That tends to confuse the ...

Hey there! Writers' block, eh? A serious pain! Anyways, the poem was amazing, though this part: "It’s really annoying.It’s so exasperating.And it’s so frustrating...." I'm not sure what it is ...

Hey there! It was a really nice poem! Usually in people's poems, the rhyme seems a little forced, but over here it was just so smooth, is was very impressive. ...

Hey there! The poem was really REALLY nice. Wherever one goes, which ever school, which ever country, there always will be bullying. The only thing you need to keep in ...

Hey there! Ah, first of all, when your talking about yourself and you use "I", please put them in captials! Where its, I, I'm, I've, etc. it must be in ...

I all so new , different, wonderful, beautiful and breathtaking. I all so new? Or is it "Its all so new..." ? Boy was I wrong about Australia After "Boy" ...

Hallo there :) It was a really sweet poem, though a little confusing. Error time! :P o You haven't used any puntuation marks :/ They are needed. I'm just reading ...