Twinkle4ever

Another dragon! I love it! It's so perfect. I wonder how long it might have taken you to make all the scales. What I love most about it are the ...

Sorry for the late reply as I was having some technical difficulties with my computer but here I am now. I think you did a great job in grasping my ...

Awww... that was so touching! :) It made me want to cry. You really have a talent for expressing emotions. I salute you for that. Throughout the poem, you kept ...

Hi! I really like this. I wish every try-to-be-cool-guy would read this and learn a lesson from it. The title's quite catchy and Am I funny, am I well-dressed? Do ...

Hello. I can't believe that you're new to this. You seem to do pretty well here. If you hadn't mentioned that, I would've probably thought you do poetry more than ...

Hello! Your poem is quite fascinating. I like your ideas here about 'The Me and the You that Hope'. The title is perfect for it. And the way you've differentiated ...

Awwww.... Okay I read the poem and I love the theme of the little bird with the broken wing. You've got a hidden poet in you. The poem was simple ...

I sat down at the base of the tree. It was a respectable distance from the girls who were eying me warily Okay I'm not sure whether it's supposed to ...

Hi there. Okay, it was too long but I managed to read it. I haven't read the previous parts but I think I get the idea about what's going on ...

First of all I'd like to ask you. Is the story teller a girl? Because I can't really distinguish that. I haven't read the first part but I feel as ...

Hey! I read the story as requested but I didn't read the comments that were given below it so please ignore it if I repeat something they've already stated. First ...

Girl you're awesome! :D Each line was so short but the words were so strong! The rhyming and the flow, you stuck to it. The first paragraph just caught my ...

Hi! First of all, I would like to say that I felt sorry for the couple. You left that effect on me (Good! :)). Second, because the idea just popped ...

Here's my review. I would say that the first two paragraphs do reflect the feeling of confusion. But when you say killing the dream of confidence. It seems to reflect ...

First of all, 'I fought for you', very touching words. Second, you've written quite well. You gave the introduction about past, present and future. You explained your thoughts and opinions ...