Tusker93

In my opinion this was a successful introduction of the character in that I could really feel how bitter and pessimistic she was about the world and people. The style ...

I really, really liked this poem it's one of the best I've ever read! It all flowed and rhymed nicely and the words really kindled some nice imagery - favourite ...

It's got a nice little message, the style is concise and efficient too. Spelling and grammar honestly seem fine to me. And you're right I suppose the beauty of it ...

There were a couple spelling errors I noticed but I have to say I was totally absorbed from the beginning to the end. I've never read twilight or any other ...

That was really something! :o. I usually dislike poetry that doesn't rhyme but this had me interested all the way true. It's really emotional and I could easily picture the ...

are you intending to write a whole book in rhymes ? o.O Just asking. like good old Dr. Seuss :lol:. Liked this poem, hope you keep writing.

That was really something, just wow. If I was the guy reading this at first I'd be thinking "my god she's such a fucking loser' but after a couple lines ...

It's almost like a true story. Really nicely written overall and got a true message. Got to me definitely. I really liked the way you wrapped it up, creepy but ...

That was fantastic. I've not got much to say except you should write more like this :D! It flowed, the rhyming was great, the imagery spot on - it was ...

I really liked that! It was so nicely worded that you didn't care whether it rhymed or not after a few lines. This isn't much of a critique I know ...

When it said 'Who is this person?' I thought the speaker had schizophrenia for a moment :lol: then I realised it was about losing someone so it must've just been ...

I loved the poem, this is one of the few times I've been impressed by poems which tell stories! When I started reading it I was entranced into finishing it ...

Overall - A nicely written poem, lots of emotion :o. It made me sympathise and empathise with the speaker of the poem, this is more of a comment than a ...

Fantastic writing style and it's definitely refreshing compared to your run of the mill romance. The style is what I enjoyed most in this and I'd also recommend poetry if ...

Firstly, I loved the idea behind the story. “I shall be the peace bringer and the end to all of you. I shall be the solution.” Mortis smiled a soft ...