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over a billion times “Too many times” would suffice here. It echoes the sense of hopelessness your preceding sentences convey. Each building has had its name removed throughout the years…….. ...

Delete this please, my mistake.

I will start off by saying that I think it would be unwise for me to even attempt to offer any recommendations as far as revisions are concerned. I personally ...

Being that you stated the grandmother as being the source of the Williams's family's problems, I'm a bit inclined to think that the notion that she's also the pinnacle of ...

Well done. While this piece could easily be read as a person giving into his own conscience, it doesn't really matter because the path to becoming a more "wholesome being" ...

This is why I joined this website. You captured the subtle but crucial parts of a romantic (though lost) relationship that only weathered souls would recognize. He is startled by ...